Comments on: About You http://loribrownblog.com/2008/09/23/about-you/ Sylvia Plath on Meds Mon, 15 Jun 2009 16:39:06 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Zrtist http://loribrownblog.com/2008/09/23/about-you/#comment-174 Zrtist Wed, 24 Sep 2008 20:23:59 +0000 http://loribrownblog.com/?p=801#comment-174 Legs pointed to the ground piercing everything found...a whistle here a whistle there first timers beware...no streetlamps to kill all they do...a shout here a shout there take the regulars fare...on backs of minds feel the flow for the first time...a moan here a moan there look away to avoid the stare...the pain caresses joints with time give the man his dime...for the dawn breaks and with it the scurry of who take our money in such a hurry...a cry here a cry there...all the mothers that care… Legs pointed to the ground piercing everything found…a whistle here a whistle there first timers beware…no streetlamps to kill all they do…a shout here a shout there take the regulars fare…on backs of minds feel the flow for the first time…a moan here a moan there look away to avoid the stare…the pain caresses joints with time give the man his dime…for the dawn breaks and with it the scurry of who take our money in such a hurry…a cry here a cry there…all the mothers that care…

]]> By: Jenn http://loribrownblog.com/2008/09/23/about-you/#comment-171 Jenn Wed, 24 Sep 2008 13:58:22 +0000 http://loribrownblog.com/?p=801#comment-171 Talk about shock value! This is hilarious, in an almost - "I can't believe I'm laughing" sort of way. :-) LOVE YOU! Talk about shock value! This is hilarious, in an almost – “I can’t believe I’m laughing” sort of way. :-) LOVE YOU!

]]> By: a0m0y7 http://loribrownblog.com/2008/09/23/about-you/#comment-169 a0m0y7 Wed, 24 Sep 2008 06:38:44 +0000 http://loribrownblog.com/?p=801#comment-169 I dont know if I like the poem, the title, or the picture the best!!!! That picture is so funny. I tell you what, you truely amaze me. I dont know if I like the poem, the title, or the picture the best!!!! That picture is so funny. I tell you what, you truely amaze me.

]]> By: butterflyliz32 http://loribrownblog.com/2008/09/23/about-you/#comment-165 butterflyliz32 Wed, 24 Sep 2008 04:11:39 +0000 http://loribrownblog.com/?p=801#comment-165 Bahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha Bahahahahahahaha I can't believe you posted this, and I totally love you for it. Bahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha Bahahahahahahaha

I can’t believe you posted this, and I totally love you for it.

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